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Wings

If I had wings and I could spread them
I would really hope to see
That place beyond the clouds
Where I could finally be free

I breathe in deep and spread them out
And look at my destination
A single tear rolls down my cheek
Ah! What a sweet sensation

I let myself fall and let my wings catch the winds
Pulling me higher and higher
I breathe in the sweet air produced by the clouds
My insides generating a wild, untamed fire

I weave in and out the sky
Practically dancing on the clouds
The wind blows me up higher
Letting me see beyond the shroud

But as I soared something happened
My beautiful white feathery wings turned to ash before my eyes
I fell to the ground with a dull 'thud'
Completely taken by surprise

I stand up slowly to see my wings
Dark shriveled things now
I stared in agonizing shock
Still wondering, "How?"


But its ok I thought as I kept walking
I'm not at that place quite yet
But I’ll be waiting for my wings
Now that much I can bet
:iconavatarmizuki:
uh its a poem i wrote some time ago, so sry if its.....bad XD

uh i gotta upload moar drawings and paper things, this is just for the sake of uploading something o.o

lol uh comments welcome i guess, i wrote this cuz idk there was alot going on at the time and i felt stressed and yeah this came out :)

yup....
>.>;........
here have a fuzzy demon!! :D :iconfuzzydemon:
nyahahah sry if it scares u, it scares me too >.<
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!elleybelle Aug 6, 2009   Photographer
This is fantastic! I really like the end when her/ your wings fell apart. That was really cool.
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:iconavatarmizuki:
o//////o
thank u so much!
:D
:hug: thanks for comment!
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!elleybelle Aug 7, 2009   Photographer
^^;
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!elleybelle Aug 8, 2009   Photographer
:D
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:iconavatarmizuki:
:)
so.....what is up with u?
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!elleybelle Aug 9, 2009   Photographer
Not much. Didn't get much sleep last night though >.<
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:iconavatarmizuki:
aww D:
wen i cant sleep i listen to music or make up stories ^^
was it cuz a nightmare? or just couldnt get to sleep?
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